Test 6

test 6 from zatul on Vimeo.

• I redrew the house and I think the house looks so much better and professional.
• I am struggling to high light the 'Just friend' (on the 19-22 seconds of the animation) I wanted to highlight it because it is the second main point of the animation. Yellow represent happy and a warm colour but I am not so sure if yellow is the right colour to represent positive. Maybe I should try blue sky colour or something. 

I changed to blue colour and highlighted 'just friend' with a blue background and white font colour. I think by changing (background and font colour) does make the word stand out ! woopp.

Houses

I drew more houses for the animation. My peers suggested me to make the house more brighter. Go Zatulll !!!

Self Evaluation

This peer review was so useful because I did some work and showed to my peers and they gave me a lot of useful feedbacks. They suggested that :

• Bex suggested me to think more of just making animation. She  recommended me to design a CD cover for this animation and make a little questions about the animation to put inse the CD case. This is because the target audience is teenagers, what I could do next is to send it to schools and let high school student to watch the animation and answer the questions to see if they can understand the animation.
• They also suggested to put © my name and credits at the end of my animation. 
• Making more playful and colourful so the animation will catch the target audiences' attention easily.

3rd December peer review.

Below are my presentation board for today. 

Test 5

Test 5 from zatul on Vimeo.
Latest animation.

I tried to make the background music louder but I think by making it lauder will make the audience distracted by the background music.

I am pretty please with this. But probably will redraw the mobile phone and the house. *patting my shoulder*

I need to rebook the voice record studio to record Adam saying 'First', 'Second', 'Third' etc.

Test 4

I am so tempted to separate the time of the typography ('Do not post', 'any information', 'for example', 'home address',  'or your mobile phone number')  in the animation. I don't know how to explain this. but please watch the video that I will post on the next post.

I think the music is too slow. Maybe I should make it a tiny bit louder.

I might need to redraw the house? and start to illustrate a mobile phone.

This is the second point of being safe on the internet which 'Do not post any personal information e.g home address or mobile phone number. I had an idea where a 'NO' with in the middle of the page and a house and a phone will animate behind the no sign.

Between the 6-9 seconds is too empty and I think I might edit the house, adding more details and change the colour etc. 

After I had some conversations with friends and thought, I decided to do like draw video in the middle and have a mouse cursos click the play button then the no sign will appear with the house and mobile phone and add some textures too (?)

Title.

Test 1



Test 2.




I am really struggling. I did a lot of sketches to animate the title but it did not work as i imagined. Then I kindly ask some peers' feedback. They suggested that the typeface is not suitable with the theme and came out with an idea of a 'typing animation effect' - as they thought it is essential to keep the internet theme across the animation.

I think it is a good idea and I started to animate them. I found it funny because the idea that my peers gave me was the same idea with my first idea that I sketched on my sketchbook.

I downloaded some sound effect from 'Freesound.com'. this web contains a lot of different sound effects and it is free.


Title test 3 from zatul on Vimeo.

I think I still need to reedit the sound, I think the sound is a bit delay.