This peer review was so useful because I did some work and showed to my peers and they gave me a lot of useful feedbacks. They suggested that :

• Bex suggested me to think more of just making animation. She  recommended me to design a CD cover for this animation and make a little questions about the animation to put inse the CD case. This is because the target audience is teenagers, what I could do next is to send it to schools and let high school student to watch the animation and answer the questions to see if they can understand the animation.
• They also suggested to put © my name and credits at the end of my animation. 
• Making more playful and colourful so the animation will catch the target audiences' attention easily.